Passion

It's a very balanced piece. I think the shilouette though gets lost. The leaves and the flow of the figure kind of contrast a bit and make it a little confusing to look at. I think the idea behind it is great. Though I think the main bump in the road is the leaves. I'd either fade them a little more or maybe find a different leaf structure. Either way I think you should pop the shilouette out because that is where my eye is drawn to first and think that it's not a prominant as it should be. You can definitely pop her out more yet also blend her into the piece if you don't want her so stark in the frame. I do like the candles and think that truly symbolizes the passion and it ties well into the movement of the girl.